Saturday, June 13, 2009

mere DOST log!!!

" I dedicate these lines to some of my distinguished friends"

क्यूँ उदास हो तुम , क्यूँ आवाज़ से नजरंदाज हो तुम !
तुमने खो दिये शायद अपने सपने , पर उन सपनो से कहाँ आज़ाद हो तुम !!

एक मुस्कुराते हुए चेहरे के सरताज हो तुम , किसी गुनगुनाते हुए गीत के ताल हो तुम !
तुम शायद भूल गए उन लम्हों को , पर उन लम्हों के कल, आज हो तुम !!

एक बहती हुई नदी की निर्मल धारा हो तुम, हर सुबह के उगते हुए सूरज की श्वेत आभा हो तुम!
शायद तुमने कभी ना सोचा हो यह , पर हमारी हर कल्पना का आधार हो तुम !!

कभी समय की तरह न रुकने वाले एक एहसास हो तुम, हमारी हर आस और विश्वास में हो तुम!
तुम्हे शायद यह नहीं पता हो, पर हमारी ज़िन्दगी के हर अंदाज़ में हो तुम !!

enJOY

10 comments:

  1. hamein bhi batao, kalpanaon ka aadhar hain kaun
    aap baichain kyun hain itane,jo khadi hain wo maun
    kabhi dekhi nahin thi beqraari itani aapke chehare par
    kya padh liya aisa aapane use chaand sunahare par???



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    bravo!!! nice write... jyada accha laga .. kyunki yeh hindi main hain ... keep penning.. aur link bhejana mat bhulana :)

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  2. Awesome!!!!!
    TOo Good...!!!!!
    Hum aapke kalam se kaayal ho gaye!!!!

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  3. @ dilip...i can't expect better response than this from an excellent poet like you..it is an honor to have a glimpse of your poetry here

    @ashish...it is not awesome, it is actually very ordinary stuff..the thing is that you also have those kind of people in your life who are very special to you..beauty lies in your eyes only

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  4. Well..I know am late to comment here... but I really didnt have the right words to put... yrr..its TOO good! I'm just running outta words to express how grand this poetry is for me...Reason? Well..not the right place to reveal ;)
    Just Keep the good work up!
    Wishes!

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  5. we are just good friends.. there is nothing like that
    then why you ppl are hiding belly like some fat
    have some thing?, wanna say something? this is the right place
    don't waste time just in the search of solace...
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    chupate ho itana kyun,miyaan zara batao
    kavitayein likhane lage? raaz na chpao
    ladakpan aur ladaki hi wo jhamela hain
    khel rahe ho jo tum,wo khel hamane bhi khela hain
    shaadi par to bulaoge na?yaar hamein yun na bhulao
    hum to waise hi hain besharm, chahe tum na bulao
    nachate gaate baarat main hum aayenge teri
    na chodenge use din,baat yeh yaad rakhana tu meri

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  6. @Dilip..it is nothing like that..still my fortunes haven't improved...it is just an illusion created by the dramatic selections of words..nothing more than that
    and btw again ur poetry!! it is unstoppable.

    @garima..keep commenting like this, your presence will increase the visits on my blog ..:)

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  7. hahaha.. if this is the reason .. then garima ji .. aap mere blog par bhi sadar amantrit hain ... :)

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  8. @ dilip...tu galat number laga raha hai :P

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  9. hahha a.. aisa kya.... then ... yeh kinchit manushya kshma prarthi hain .. :)

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  10. puneeta says that this hindi poem is vry nice
    kaha se churai............ye mein likh rahi hu

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